Senin, 29 Mei 2017

"What is the strongest advantage that technology can bring us?"

INTRODUCTION  : The Strongest Advantage of Transportation

Supporting Paragraph 1 : Transportation for educational opportunities.

(Example)                          : Go to campus takes more than two hours by using public transportation.

(Reason)                             : Imagine if without using public transportation, it takes a long time to get to the campus. Transportation is helping me a lot.

(Personal Story)                 : I had trouble getting to campus because there is no one public transportation, so i was late to start my first course in campus.

Supporting Paragraph 2  : Transportation for professional opportunities.

(Example)                           : Sending important document from one company to another.

(Reason)                             : With public transportation taking or sending documents becomes easier and faster than using mail.

(Personal Story)                  : Bad experience when i waiting for documents sent by mail that never came.

CONCLUSION                : Transportation is needed in life, because its make easier our life, and our business to go from one place to another.

INTRODUCTION 1
       As a student, I need transportation, that makes it easier for me to go and come home from campus, not only campus facilities that are important for education but transportation is also something that is important.